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Ricardo Richardson's avatar

Pete

Congrats on your first draft. This isn't a comment about content but about form. And it's simply to say that I think the Manifesto desperately needs a Contents list so that the reader can get an overview of its structure. Otherwise one's scrolling through a 106-page document with no idea about what's coming!

In Word, if you set up the various levels of headings is a particular way, it can automatically produce a Contents list with all the relevant page numbers. If the inner workings of Word aren't your thing, I'm sure a reader could do it for you fairly easily.

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Edward Lloyd Owen's avatar

Pete, I just wanted to congratulate you on an absolutely sterling piece of work. Well done and thank you - I shall look forward to reading it over the course of the next couple of days.

BTW, I entirely second what Richard has said about a contents page - that is a complete necessity, but in your own time… it certainly won’t stop me reading it!

Well done again and let’s hope this helps someone somewhere be sensible about conservative policy and the underpinning centre right thinking again. 👊

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